Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Disease

and illness will be prevented if reducing housing issues and environmental

pollution

are what

government

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focus on.

This

writer believes that giving

people

a stable place to live will reduce their movement and stop the infection,

along with

that

is

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solving

pollution

problems will lower the harmful substances in the environment and improve public health. The most considerable point is that if

people

is

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are

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given a place to stay, they do not have to wander around anymore and stop the

disease

to spread

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from spreading

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. Since there are

less

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fewer

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interactions between

people

,

virus

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viruses

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and bacteria cannot move to a new host which will

decline

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decrease

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the number of

patience

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patients

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. Eventually,

help

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helps

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to find the infected area and isolate that place which could be helpful for investing the origin or the factor of the

disease

so that

solution

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a solution

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can be given.

For instance

, during the

epidemic

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pandemic

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,

people

are locked up in their own

house

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houses

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so that the virus cannot spread and

for

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apply

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those who do not have a home,

they

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apply

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could go to

the

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a

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temporary shelter to utilize the

controlling

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control

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process. Another consideration that must be

point

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pointed

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out is that reducing

pollution

an

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can

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improve

people

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people's

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health. As our surroundings are poisonous, our immune system will be slowly damaged and

then

when we come across a sick person, our body

would

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will

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not have the necessary

defense

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defence

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to fight back.

Consequently

, our

body

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bodies

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become vulnerable and fragile when approach those who are infected.

For example

, drinking contaminated water or inhaling polluted air could damage our organs so

that

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apply

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we need time to repair these damages which

make

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makes

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our immune system weaker than ever during

this

period. In conclusion, it is necessary to reduce environmental

pollution

and housing problems if the aim is to prevent illness and

disease

.

Hence

, with these issues

be

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being

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solved, the preventing and curing process will be boosted.