The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pictures describe the changes that took place between 2007 and 2010 on the
road
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to a city hospital.
Overall
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, the unspecific hospital underwent a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which are the destruction of 6
bus
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stops, the appearance of roundabouts, and the expansion of the car park. On the western side of the
road
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, the three
bus
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stops were removed to make way for the construction of the new
bus
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station. There used to be an area for 3
bus
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stops and a parking space for both staff and public uses in the southern, but it was
then
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redeveloped into a separate parking for only staff,
while
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the public one was located on the east catering for the increase of public cars. In the middle of the map, the main hospital
road
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saw a noteworthy change, with the erection of two new roundabouts between 2007 and 2010. The first one was added at the crossroad of the hospital
road
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and the city
road
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,
whereas
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the remaining one was introduced at the three-way intersection of the ring
road
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and the hospital
road
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.
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, both new roundabouts are connected with the
bus
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station.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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