Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity (those teaching programmes that involve the use of written materials, videos, televised lessons and the Internet), but some people argue that courses can never be as good as those taken by attending a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Today, there is an argument between people who believe that online teaching has become more famous than before,
while
other individuals believe that this
method is not comparable to in-person learning in universities. This
essay will agree that distance
learning will provide a situation where students
can reduce their costs of learning as well as
access
to syllabi at any time
they need.
On the one hand, learning college
courses via the internet that involve visual materials is now becoming more popular these days. Since a lot of college
students
spend most of their time
in heavy traffic jams or traveling
long distances to reach their campuses, Change the spelling
travelling
this
circumstance puts them at risk of monetary problems. However
, staying at home and learning from a distance
can help them to reduce their costs and save some money. Also
, it is not possible for everyone to attend classes
on time
, so, having access
to teaching materials at any time
not only gives pupils enough time
to attend teaching seasons at any time
but also
they can access
a syllabus multiple times. For instance
, according to
a survey which was conducted 2 years ago in Iran, college
students
who took attendance classes
online were situated in better monetary positions.
On the other hand
, these days some people think that spending time
in person in university classes
is more beneficial compared to distance
learning. They believe that if students
attend classes
and are taught face-to-face, they will understand lessons more effectively. However
, some pupils only attend in classrooms and do not pay attention to their professors. As a result
, studying in person not only has no results for them but also
they waste their time
for long hours instead
of doing some useful activities. For example
, the success rate of students
who spent their time
preparing classes
for university entry exams was only 20% in 2020 in Iran while
more than 80% of online students
were successful.
In conclusion, distance
learning which uses the internet and other visual equipment has been getting famous while
some people believe that this
trend can not be as effective as in-person classes
in college
. This
essay agrees that online learning can reduce the amount of money which is used on transportation, and access
to course syllabi is the main advantage. In contrast
, not paying too much attention to tutors and waste of time
are the main drawbacks of face-to-face learning.Submitted by ramtin.n1374 on
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