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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
The given table shows the number of
people
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 from five European nations living in each other's
countries
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 in 2011.
Overall
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, The total
population
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 of
people
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 living in each other's
countries
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 was 3.298.000 in 2011. Compared to other
countries
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people
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 the German
people
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 had the highest
population
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 in other
countries
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. which was 1.198.000. The British
people
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 had the second highest
population
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 in other
countries
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, compared to other
countries
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 the British
people
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 had more
population
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 in Polish and the total
population
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 is 1.037.000 in other
countries
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. Spanish were the third highest
population
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 in other
countries
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, they had a larger
population
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 in Britain compared to other
countries
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 and the total
population
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 is 861.000. The fourth highest
population
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 was the Italians which had a total
population
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 of 196.000 and compared to other
countries
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 they had the highest
population
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 in Poland. At
last
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, the Polish had the lowest
population
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 in other
countries
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 which is 6.000 and they had the largest
population
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 in Germany. The total
population
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 of all the
countries
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 was 3.298.000

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, countries, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.
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