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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
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The provided
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 chart presents the amount of rubbish generated by three companies during the past 15 years from 2000 to 2015. The blue
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 shows the amount of waste in
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 of
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 A. Meanwhile, the green
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 represents
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 B and the orange
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 is for
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 C. The trends of those three entities were completely different. To start,
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 A was on a downward trend for 15 years. The number of wastes gradually dropped from 12
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 in 2000 to 8
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 in 2015.
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,
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 B’s figures fluctuated. It rose from 8
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 in 2000 to 11
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 in 2005,
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 it sharply dropped to 3
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 in 2015.
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, waste from
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 C continuously climbed from 4
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 in 2000 to 11
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 in 2015.
According to
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 the diagram,
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 C had the highest amount in 2015, followed by
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 A and
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 B relatively.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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