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The diagram below shows the plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the plan of the public library 20 years ago and the present . Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is clearly noticeable that major changes were made . Added new facilities
such
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 as computer
room
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, cafe and self-service machines . In the past ,the central library had as soon as entered there was
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an
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Enquiry desk with tickets , book return on
right-hand
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the right-hand
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side
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 and a Reading
room
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 with newspaper , and magazines on
left-handhand
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the left-handhand
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side
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 . In the middle of
hall
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the hall
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, there were two tables with chairs, Adult
fiction
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books
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 and CDs , videos, and computer games on
left
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the left
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side
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 on the opposite
side
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 Adult
fiction
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books
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 and children's
books
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 At present, the enquiry desk replaced with a new cafe , reading
room
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 with a computer place .
Adult
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The adult
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fiction
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books
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 area
also
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 includes an Information desk
as well as
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 Self-service machines .All the reference
books
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 are on the left
side
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 .On
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the left-handhand
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left-handhand
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left-hand hand
left-hand and
left-hand-hand
 corner are new two sofas with Storytelling events with Children's
fiction
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books
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. New lecture
room
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on
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in
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right-hand
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the right-hand
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 corner .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, side, fiction, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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