The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
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It has been two centuries since the first time a
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, In Indonesia, based on the chart data revealed by the Statistic Agency of Indonesia, it was said that as the population increases, so does the number of Linking Words
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, the government not only kept silent about that situation, but they made a rule that personal Linking Words
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, climate change and air pollution are the next reason. Just imagine living on a street full of Linking Words
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