You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. Yell him/her of the incorrect information. Give him/her the correct information. Explain why they should correct it.

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Dear Author, I am writing to you to inform you about some incorrect information in your newly published book related to the

city

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of Yazd. Recently, I bought a book about the

city

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of Yazd, my hometown, and I have found some wrong information about the ancient towers and castles which are located in the traditional part of the

city

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. I am wondering how

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false data is passed to you. I suppose you should review the stories associated with the origins of these historical sites and refine most of them. You can find accurate information in the

encyclopedia

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Encyclopedia

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tourism

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Tourism

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in Iran

that

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apply

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was published by the official sources in 1999, you can

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find an electronic copy of it in the National Library of Iran. As I have noticed, your stories may be harmful to the reputation of my

city

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, especially that part in which the aforementioned buildings are located, and it can cause some detrimental effects on the tourism industry,

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, the prosperity and the economy of people that are working in that area can negatively be affected. So, please act as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, M.Rezaeian

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Task Achievement

Ensure all statements or claims about factual inaccuracies are clear and specific to help the reader understand exactly what needs to be corrected.

Coherence & Cohesion

While your letter is well-structured, including a brief introduction of how you came across the book could enhance engagement.

Logical Structure

You have effectively organized your letter into paragraphs, each serving a clear purpose - informing the author of the inaccuracies, providing correct information, and explaining the potential negative impact.

Writing Tone

Your polite and respectful tone is well-suited to the context of writing to an author about a sensitive issue.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

201 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

courteous introduction
inaccurate information
pinpointing specifics
factual data
potential misconceptions
credibility
verifying
local expertise
respectful request
future editions
admiration

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