The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The visualized maps depict how the development of the public space, situated between Arnold Avenue on the north and Eldon Street on the south, known as Grange Park, changed over the period from 1920 to the present. There was considerable enhancement throughout the years, and it was gradually transformed from a small area into a multifunctional hub in the town.
Initially
, the site was built in 1920 for the recreational sector, which had a beautiful fountain in its
center
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, but now it has switched to a beautiful rose garden surrounded by public seats. Another noticeable transition is the replacement of the small yet legendary stage for musicians to perform on back in the 1920s by the Amphitheatre for concerts. In the corner of the Grange, there was a tiny pond for water plants back in the twenties, which was transformed into the children's playground;
moreover
, there is a cafe next to it that offers delicious foods and drinks. The most innovative improvement of all is the construction of the enchanted water feature in the entrance that links to the underground parking lot.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pond
  • northwest corner
  • large central open area
  • residential areas
  • community-oriented space
  • playground
  • eastern border
  • parking lot
  • convenience
  • commercial zone
  • amenities
  • walking path
  • encircles
  • joggers
  • accessible
  • entrances
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