The bar chart shows the level of air pollution in five different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph provides information about the volume of gas emissions in four
countries
, namely the USA, the UK, Austria, Australia, and New Zealand, measured in millions of tonnes. Overall
, it is obvious from the graph that the northern hemisphere countries
have higher air
pollution
than that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Change preposition
apply
of
the southern hemisphere Change preposition
apply
countries
.
According to
the graph, americans
suffer from the worst Change the capitalization
Americans
air
quality as their air
pollution
level reaches a high of 80, becoming the leading nation to emit gas emissions. Meanwhile, the UK and Austria share the same figures for air
pollution
to become the runner-up amounting to half as much as the USA produces.
On the other hand
, the neighboring
Change the spelling
neighbouring
countries
, Australia and New Zealand, can breathe the cleanest air
as they generate smaller volumes of gas emissions compared to the other nations. Australia generates a slight level of air
pollution
above New Zealand accounting for 35 and 30 respectively.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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