Examine the arguments in favour of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.

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experiments

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animals

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is taken positively by many people;

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, others completely oppose

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idea.

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it is cruel for

animals

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to do some scientific research on them, I believe it has some positive benefits for humans. Admittedly, animal

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may be cruel to them.

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is because

scientists

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test different methods on

animals

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first and keep them in captivity for a long time to observe the output.

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restrict

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their natural lives and dietary habits; thereby damaging their physical

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psychological health.

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, it is for the betterment of humans. To justify, most

experiments

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are always done on

animals

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first to protect the human species because sometimes these

experiments

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may have side effects on human bodies if researchers try on humans directly but not on

animals

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scientists

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find a cure for cancer disease

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experimenting on rats and pigs. In

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way, many human lives have been saved from

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disease.

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this

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scientists

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make sure that there will be no harm to

animals

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under the Animal Protection Act. Since

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have to

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permission from higher authorities before making

animals

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their subjects for their tests, they take care of the possible side effects of chemicals used in these tests.

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, The first heart transplant was done on a dog who was suffering from a cardiac disease, and the dog lived for three years more

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this

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trial. In conclusion, some people think that animal research is not justified for

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whereas

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I believe that

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experiments

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are for improving the health of people without harming

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Ensure you address all parts of the task in-depth. While you've presented arguments both for and against animal experiments, you could delve deeper into the opposing view as well for a more balanced discussion.

coherence cohesion

Improve the flow between ideas and ensure logical transitions. While the essay has a good logical structure, smoother transitions between paragraphs and ideas will enhance readability.

coherence cohesion

Clear introduction and conclusion which succinctly present the main point and your stance.

task achievement

The essay provides relevant examples to justify claims, such as the example of cancer research using rats and pigs and the heart transplant on a dog.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

268 words

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