You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. ▪️Yell him/her of the incorrect information ▪️Give him/her the correct information Explain why they should correct it.
Dear Mr Naseri,
I have recently read your newly published
book
about the city
"Zanjan" and I am writing to inform you about some of its wrong information.
Initially
, I want to ask you when you do not have enough data and knowledge about a city
, why do you write a book
in this
regard? Your audience will read and spread this
artificial information which will lead to younger generations' confusion meanwhile other countries try to clear some of the glarious historical data of our nation.
The wrong information I found in your book
includes:- Soltanieh Monument is the oldest one in the world in its category not just one of the old buildings.- The running river in this
city
is called "Zanjan Rood" not "Simineh Rood"
I strictly request you publish a revised version of your book
unless all of Zanjan's citizens make a complaint in court over your attempt to change the history of our city
.
I look forward to hearing your explanations.
Sincerely Yours,
Jamal BakhsiSubmitted by keyhan454 on
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Tone Improvement
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Detail Enhancement
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Constructive Suggestion
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Task Achievement
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