The bar graph below shows the number of tourists visiting two different cities by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
2. The bar chart shows us
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the
number
of tourist
in Dover and Troy by Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
seasons
. The highest Fix the agreement mistake
season
number
of tourist
in Dover was in winter and the lowest in spring. The highest Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
number
of tourist
was 25000. The highest Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
number
of tourist
in Troy was in summer. It was 22500 Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
tourist
. The Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
number
of tourist
was increasing between spring and winter. The Change to a plural noun
tourists
number
of tourist
increasing during the year in Change to a plural noun
tourists
Change the capitalization
Dover
dover
Change the capitalization
Dover
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