The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it likes now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate
plan
for Correct article usage
the plan
floor
in a particular public library Correct article usage
the floor
about
20 years and Change preposition
for about
latest
development.
Correct article usage
the latest
Overall
, it can be seen that there is
a lot of differences in Correct subject-verb agreement
are
replacement
of facilities.
Correct article usage
the replacement
Initially
, in the north western
of the library, there Correct your spelling
northwestern
were
a Change the verb form
was
room
which contained CDs, vidoes
and games with Correct your spelling
videos
computer
. Add an article
the computer
a computer
Besides
, in the next room
, visitors could find many adult fiction books
there. To the south west
, there was a reading Correct your spelling
southwest
room
which connected with previous
Correct article usage
the previous
room
and providing
many newspapers and magazines. In front of chairs and Wrong verb form
provided
table
Fix the agreement mistake
tables
was
located in the centre of the building is Unnecessary verb
apply
entrance
. Add an article
the entrance
In
the right side of Change preposition
On
this
sites
, there were three facilities. Fix the agreement mistake
site
Firstly
, a space that consisted of some children's book
. Fix the agreement mistake
books
Next,
it was followed by adult
non-fiction Correct article usage
an adult
books
room
and enquiry desk which provided tickets, book returns and
etc.
Nowadays, it Correct word choice
apply
find
out that there are Change the verb form
finds
also
some changes and developments of
the library's layout. The children's fiction Change preposition
in
books
is
located to the Change the verb form
are
south west
which is equipped with a couple of sofas and storytelling events. Next to Correct your spelling
southwest
this
room
are 2 rooms which give all kind
of reference Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
books
and computer
respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
computers
In
the right side, there are three rooms Change preposition
On
which
linked together. The lecture Correct pronoun usage
apply
room
is positioned to the Correct your spelling
southeast
south east
which is connected with Correct your spelling
southeast
space
area of adult fiction Add an article
a space
books
, Correct article usage
an information
information
desk and self-service machines. Correct article usage
an information
Finally
, the new cafe is established in the corner besides
the entrance.Replace the word
beside
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
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