The pie chart represents the source of fish import to Canada and the table shows the total value in Billions of Dollars.

The pie chart represents the source of fish import to Canada and the table shows the total value in Billions of Dollars.
The given infographics are three pie charts and a table which illustrates sources from where
fishes
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fish
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were imported to Canada in three different years and how much
do
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the
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cost. The unit quantified is in
billion
dollars
.
Overall
, China was the major contributor in two years and the year 2020 was the most profitable one.
To begin
with, it is quite evident from the given pie graph that on adding the data from all
the
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three years together, China holds up a significant amount of portion which is 117% (24% in 2010, 49% in 2015 and 2020). Closely followed by
this
are various other sources which contribute their share of around 112% to Canada
whereas
Norway has the least percentage share a sixth in 2010, almost a quarter in 2015 and
lastly
, 30% in 2020.
On the other hand
, from the
table
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it is clear that
cost
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the cost
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of import was the lowest
that is
8.66
billion
dollars
in 2010
while
it was highest in the year 2020 which
ws
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was
16.52
billion
dollars
whilst in the year 2015 the value was
at
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16.52
billion
dollars
.
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