Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and govenment should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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FEW

INDIVIDUALS

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THINK THAT YOUNGSTERS NEED TO HAVE ALL THE RIGHTS TO FREE

EDUCATION

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, AND IT MUST BE THE RESPONSIBILITY OF THE GOVERNMENT TO MAKE IT FREE OF COST NO MATTER THEIR FINANCIAL BACKGROUND.

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LEAD TO SOME DRAWABACKS. I DO NOT ENTIRELY ENTERTAIN THE IDEA OF YOUNGSTERS WANTING TO HAVE FREE

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NO MATTER WHAT THEIR FINANCIAL STATUS IS, AS

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COULD LEAD TO THE PRIVATE UNIVERSITIES TO GO BANKRUPT. THE UNIVERSITIES DO NOT JUST FOCUS ON GIVING

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, BUT THEY

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PROVIDE HYGENE FOR STUDENTS BY SANITISING AND KEEPING THE UNIVERSITY CLEAN. THOSE WHO ARE WEALTHY ENOUGH TO AFFORD THE

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SYSTEM, MUST BE DUTIFUL AND PAY THE FEES FOR THE UNIVERSITIES.

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, IF A WEALTHY MAN'S SON IS STUDYING IN THE UNIVERSITY FREE OF COST, AND HE IS CAPABLE ENOUGH TO PAY THE FULL FEE STRUCTURE OF THE INSTITUTION WITHOUT ANY ISSUE,

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THE CHILDREN WILL NOT HAVE ANY VALUE LEFT FOR MONEY.

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, IF GOVERNMENT MAKES THE

EDUCATION

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FREE FOR UPPER-CLASS MEN IN

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SOCIETY,

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THE IMPORTANCE OF

EDUCATION

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WILL

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BE LOST, AS MANY

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WILL NOT TAKE THEIR STUDIES AND EXAMS SERIOUSLY, AS THEY WILL HAVE A CHANCE TO APPEAR AS MANY TIMES AS THEY WANT AND THAT TO FREE OF COST.

ADDITIONALLY

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, I BELIEVE THAT TO HAVE A FREE

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, THERE MUST BE A FEW CONDITIONS THAT THE

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MUST GO THROUGH,

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, YOUNGSTERS MUST ACHIEVE AT LEAST

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GPA TO APPEAR FOR FREE

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, OR MAYBE AN ENTRANCE EXAM THAT LOOKS AT THE

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INDIVIDUALS

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KNOWLEDGE OF PREVIOUS

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. IN CONCLUSION, DESPITE MANY

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PROTESTING FOR HAVING THE RIGHT TO FREE

EDUCATION

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. IN MY PERSONAL VIEW, I BELIEVE THAT THOSE

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WHO ARE CAPABLE ENOUGH TO PAY THE FULL TUITION FEE MUST TAKE THE RESPONSIBILITY OF PAYING FEES TO THE INSTITUTION.

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