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The bar chart illustrates the estimated amount of oil produced in 6 countries between 1990 and 2010, measured in millions of barrels per day.

The bar chart illustrates the estimated amount of oil produced in 6 countries between 1990 and 2010, measured in millions of barrels per day.
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,
oil
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production
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 capacity tended to
increase
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 during
this
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 20-year period. The figures for Saudi Arabia were significantly higher than in the other countries,
while
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production
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 was lowest in Qatar. From 1990 to 2010, there was a significant
increase
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 in
oil
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production
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 in Saudi Arabia. In 1990, just over 8
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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 were produced and
this
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 rose steadily, reaching a peak of over 14
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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 in 2010.
In contrast
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, the smallest producer was Qatar. Despite a slight
increase
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 in 2000,
production
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 in Qatar remained relatively stable at less than 1
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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. The other countries saw a slight rise in
oil
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production
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 over the period. The estimated figure for Iran in 1990 was over 3
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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, compared with around 2
million
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barrels
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 in the other three countries.
Although
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production
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 did not
increase
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 in 2000 in the UAE, the amount of
oil
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 produced peaked in 2010 in Iran at over 4
million
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barrels
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 and at almost 4
million
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barrels
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 in Iraq, Kuwait and the UAE.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, production, increase, million, barrels, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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