The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors who satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The table compares the number of
visitors
who visited the Ashdown Museum before and after restoration, Use synonyms
whereas
the pie graph, the information from the survey done on Linking Words
visitors
during the same two years, is depicted. Use synonyms
Overall
, the number of people and the rate of satisfied Linking Words
visitors
has increased post-reconstruction of the museum.
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According to
the first chart before restoration, 74000 Linking Words
visitors
have seen the museum, Use synonyms
while
the figure for them increased by 18000, to 92000.
The second graph shows half of Linking Words
visitors
were dissatisfied and very dissatisfied, followed by those satisfied (30%). Use synonyms
Moreover
, the proportion of people not respond and were very satisfied together totalling one-fifth. Linking Words
Furthermore
, during post-reconstruction, one-quarter of the results were allocated to those who were dissatisfied, very satisfied, and had no response. More than two-thirds of Linking Words
visitors
were very satisfied and satisfied which accounted for two-fifths and 35 %.Use synonyms
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