The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of retain the table shows where the money came from and the chart show how it was distributed summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons very relevant

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of retain the table shows where the money came from and the chart show how it was distributed summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons very relevant
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The table and pie charts illustrate the data about the police budget from 2017 to 2018 in the area of Britain and the way how
this
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capital was distributed.
Overall
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, there are two major sources
such
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as national government, local taxes and others.
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, money was spent on technology, salaries for officers and staff and buildings and transport. It is obvious that a great amount of cash was given away to workers, meanwhile equal cash was given to construction.
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, in 2017, the collected sum of euros was 304.7
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and 175,5 total was presented by the ministry, meanwhile, grants had only 38 much.
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, taxes which were invested by locals was 91,2 m.
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, 75% of that budget was spent on salaries for staff who worked in the police department, in the meantime only 8% was spent on technological advances. To add 17 % was used for construction and vehicles.
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, in 2018, it was more money than in 2017, because after one term they had 318,6 m. A huge quantity of cash was donated by the government again as in that time and taxes added 10 million than in that year.
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time 69% was invected on salaries less than in 2017, for 6%.
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, in the
last
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year, the same load of money was mounted for buildings,
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capital dedicated to technology increased noticeably by 6%.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fiscal
  • allocation
  • revenue
  • government grants
  • taxpayer contributions
  • expenditure
  • financial year
  • budgetary changes
  • capital investment
  • operational costs
  • shift in priorities
  • percentile changes
  • incremental increase/decrease
  • funded
  • allocated
  • resources
  • budgeting decisions
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