The table below gives information about rail transport in four counties.
The given table illustrates provided data about transportation
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railway in Change preposition
by
Malaysia
, Canada
, China
and UAE
, in 3 different categories. Overall
it can be seen that,
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China
's railway has the most popularity in comparison with other counteries
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countries
also
has the highest capicity
of commuters to transport. Though Correct your spelling
capacity
Canada
carried the highest amount of cargo among the others.
In number
of people using rail transport, Change the article
a number
the number
China
has a striking difference with others with 27 million. Malaysia
and UAE
are in the second and third place with 5.9 and 5.5 million and Canada
is in the bottom of the list with only 0.3 million. China
owned the first place in passenger kilometres per head of population group as well. this number
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These numbers
is
780 and 770 for Correct subject-verb agreement
are
UAE
and Malaysia
. However
, Canada
is still the least with 80.
On the other hand
, Canada
carried 28.20 billions
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billion
of
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tones
of cargo which is the Correct your spelling
tonnes
toppest
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most top
and
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following
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followed
China
, malaysia
and Change the capitalization
Malaysia
UAE
with 23.01, 22.2 and 21.9 billions
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billion
of
tons respectively.Change preposition
apply
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words malaysia, canada, china, uae with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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