The table below gives information about rail transport in four counties.

The table below gives information about rail transport in four counties.
The given table illustrates provided data about transportation
with
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railway in
Malaysia
,
Canada
,
China
and
UAE
, in 3 different categories.
Overall
it can be seen that
,
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China
's railway has the most popularity in comparison with other
counteries
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countries
and
also
has the highest
capicity
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capacity
of commuters to transport. Though
Canada
carried the highest amount of cargo among the others. In
number
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of people using rail transport,
China
has a striking difference with others with 27 million.
Malaysia
and
UAE
are in the second and third place with 5.9 and 5.5 million and
Canada
is in the bottom of the list with only 0.3 million.
China
owned the first place in passenger kilometres per head of population group as well.
this number
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is
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780 and 770 for
UAE
and
Malaysia
.
However
,
Canada
is still the least with 80.
On the other hand
,
Canada
carried 28.20
billions
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of
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tones
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tonnes
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of cargo which is the
toppest
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and
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following
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by
China
,
malaysia
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Malaysia
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and
UAE
with 23.01, 22.2 and 21.9
billions
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billion
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of
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tons respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words malaysia, canada, china, uae with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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