The Table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. That starts so the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods.

The Table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. That starts so the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods.
A glance at the table provided reveals the percentages of research asking respondents how satisfied they were with their visit during the
year
before and the
year
after it was refurbished.
Overall
, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the proportion of dissatisfied people has had exponential growth after the reconstruction.
According to
what is shown, the former pie chart contains 40% dissatisfied, 30% satisfied, 15% very satisfied, 10% very dissatisfied and 5% no response which has remained stable in the two tables.
Additionally
, the latter pie chart shows 15% dissatisfied, 40% satisfied, 35% very satisfied, 5% very dissatisfied.
Thus
, it is reasonable to summarize that the rate of very satisfied respondents in the latter table has increased somewhere in the vicinity of two-fold more than that of the former table and
also
the portion of dissatisfied people in the prior
year
has risen more than twice rather than that of dissatisfied individuals in the following
year
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • survey results
  • very satisfied
  • improved facilities
  • exhibits
  • attendance
  • comparison
  • increase/decrease
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