The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.

The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.
The line graph illustrates the figure of people
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in 4 different kinds of sports:
basketball
,
tennis
,
badminton
, and
rugby
, in a particular region over two decades starting in 1985.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that
tennis
experienced an upward trend,
whereas
that of
rugby
underwent a downward trend.
However
, it is interesting to note that both figures
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of
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basketball
and
badminton
remain stable throughout the given timeframe.
To begin
with, in 1985, at around 240
peoples
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,
rugby
was the highest participants among
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the others
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others
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three activities, followed by
tennis
,
basketball
, and
badminton
, at 150
peoples
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, at 80
peoples
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people
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, and
60
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peoples
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people
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, respectively. In regards
with
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the following 10 years, from 1995 to 2005,
although
the number of players in
tennis
and
rugby
have
exact
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same figure at 200
peoples
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, the popularity of the two activities
seem
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to shift alternatively.
While
tenis
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tennis
player
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players
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gradually
increasd
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increased
and reached
its
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their
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peak at an
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of
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220
peoples
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people
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, the
numbers
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number
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of
rugby's
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rugby
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players dropped miserably to only 50
persons
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. Unlike the other two sports that experience either the rise
and
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fall of
its
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their
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participants,
basketball
and
badminton
's popularity remain the same at around 80
peoples
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, and 60
peoples
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people
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with
a small changes
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of no more than 5-10
peoples
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people
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words basketball, tennis, badminton, rugby, peoples with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • participants
  • participation
  • trend
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • stability
  • popularity
  • regional interest
  • key trends
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • local leagues
  • school programs
  • media influence
  • public health initiatives
  • availability of facilities
  • competitive success
  • fluctuations
  • impact
  • major tournaments
  • notable players
  • local clubs
  • coaching programs
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