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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
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The process below illustrates
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recycling plastic bottles. Overview, The are 9 stages in the whole process of recycling bottles, starting with throwing
it
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to
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 the garbage,
ending
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 with producing products. The stage of recycling begins with throwing used bottles
to
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 the trash,
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furthermore
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 waste collection
vehicle
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 take out it, in the next stage
it
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 will
be bring
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 to the recovering
center
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 called sorting, after that
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transfers
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 to compressing
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 the blocks,
therefore
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 the blocks pass on to
crushing
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 process.
In
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contrast
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 it will be set to washing mechanism, next it goes through the producing plastic pallets, directly
then
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 heating pellets to raw material will start,
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 raw material appears, on the final stage they will move raw materials into the
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "therefore".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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