The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

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recycling plastic bottles. Overview, The are 9 stages in the whole process of recycling bottles, starting with throwing

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the garbage,

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with producing products. The stage of recycling begins with throwing used bottles

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the trash,

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waste collection

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take out it, in the next stage

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to the recovering

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called sorting, after that

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to compressing

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the blocks,

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the blocks pass on to

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process.

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it will be set to washing mechanism, next it goes through the producing plastic pallets, directly

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heating pellets to raw material will start,

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raw material appears, on the final stage they will move raw materials into the

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

122 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

recycling
mitigate
environmental impact
landfills
conservation
sorted
residual waste
adhesives
shredded
pellets
manufacturing
ecological
economical
sustainable
automation
raw material
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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

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