You recently learned that a close friend of yours has had a baby, and you purchased a gift for the baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Congratulate them on the arrival of the baby. Describe the gift you have chosen for the baby.

#close #friend #baby #gift

Hello Mohan, Hello! How are you?Hope

this

letter finds you in good health and radiant spirits.I am writing

this

in order to seek a warm wish for your newborn

baby

and let to know about the present that I

made

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bought for my new nephew.

To begin

with, I was over the moon the time I heard about

this

precious news that I

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have been

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awaiting

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waiting

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for a long time.I hearty congratulate you on your blessings

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being a parent is a wonderful experience for everyone.I was on the job when I got

this

interesting message from your mother. Trust me ,I had already made a plan that I would welcome your

baby

with a beautiful teddy bear as an initial toy that I ordered in advance from my brother's shop.

Therefore

, Yesterday I went to the market to pick it up and I sent it in a parcel to deliver to your residence.It will be there in upcoming weekends so it will be a great time for me when your

baby

will plan with it. Hope so

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will get off next week

then

I will make a trip to see your

baby

. I would really appreciate it if you could accept my present as my feeling of love for

newborn

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the newborn

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baby

.I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours Sincerely, Preet.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that you maintain a clear logical structure throughout the letter. Consider using paragraphs to break up distinct points for better readability.

coherence cohesion

Review the letter for grammar and punctuation errors to improve clarity and comprehension.

task achievement

The letter conveys warm congratulations effectively and describes the gift in a heartfelt manner.

task achievement

You have used a friendly and warm tone throughout the letter, which is very suitable for this context.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

224 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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