The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and the projections for 2050

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and the projections for 2050
The pie charts present and compare the share of Yemen’s and Italy’s population age in 2000
as well as
the anticipations for 2050.
Overall
, the age
group
of
newborn
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to 14
years
old dropped.
In contrast
to the 60 above
group
which had an increase
instead
. Interestingly, the independent population shows the most change out of the three groups. In 2000, the age
group
that
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the highest share in Yemen
is
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the 0 to 14
years
group
followed by the 15 to 59 and the 60 plus, accounting for 50.1, 46.3, and 3.6
percent
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in order.
This
is slightly different from Italy’s which has 15 to 59
years
first
then
the
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60 and higher with the 0 to 14
years
coming
last
, accounting for 61.6, 24.1 and 14.3
percent
respectively. In 2050, the sequence of Yemen’s
group
had changed slightly:
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15 to 59
years
group
having the most at 57.3
percent
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; the 0 to 14
years
group
at 37
percent
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; the 60 and up
group
at 5.7
percent
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.
However
, Italy’s series stayed the same with the 15 to 59
years
group
being the biggest at 46.2
percent
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, with 60 or more in second place at 42.3
percent
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, and 0 to 14
years
in third at 11.5
percent
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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