two pie chart give the result of survey in the museum in after and previous year
The pie charts illustrate the aftermath of surveys among the guests. Meanwhile, it is a comparison between the former and the later years about
people
Change noun form
people's
respose
.
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response
Overall
, before transformation, people
who were dissatisfied had a lion's share. Although
no response from visitors is constant. however
, After changes more people
are very satisfied.
Looking at the pie charts, it is crystal clear that previously the majority of people
were dissatisfied 40% and later the ratio declined to 15%. Whereas
, very satisfied surged to double 35% as in the past it stood at 15% and no response from tourists has recorded the same percentileof
5% in both years.
Moving towards the rest of the information, satisfaction was 30% before transforming the museum as
it climbed dramatically to 10%. Correct your spelling
percentile of
percentile
People
who were very dissatisfied were 10% and after some development
it fell to half.Add a comma
development,
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