The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it.

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now and planned future changes for it.

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, new roads and roundabouts will be settled respectively, the airfield will be transformed into an Industrial estate .

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, gas stations, the

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center

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, and the ring

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will remain the same First of all, there are some obvious changes in the railway system that

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planned , the numerous numbers of new ways were planned to settle immediately. The most noticeable one was

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plan, a new circular

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that has 3 outputs. Alternatively, to the left of the railway

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, there is a planned parallel A4

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which ends in

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Center.

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, the second noticeable prediction the airfield station will be demolished and the Industrial estate will be settled in the place for

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, the gas station and

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will experience the same settlement in the future. Alternatively, there are no planned reconstructions for the build-up area ring

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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159 words

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The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it.

In newspaper, local hospital advertised for people to do unpaid work in the hospital Write a letter Why do you want to do unpaid work Which kind of work do you want When you can join the hospital

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