The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

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had

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visited a particular Caribbean

Island

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from 2010 until 2017 as

tourists

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.

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, the total

number

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of

tourists

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increased dramatically. At the beginning of the period, the

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of

tourists

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accounted for 1

million

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individuals,

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0.25

million

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came from

cruise

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ships and 1.75

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were hosted on the

island

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. The

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of

visitors

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constantly increased until 2015,

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remained stable at 2.75

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for one year and after that rose rapidly, ending up at 3.5

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, which is three and a half times more compared to the start point.

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,

visitors

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from

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ships

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become the majority. Started as a minority in 2010, they doubled their numbers in 2011,

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went down to 0.25

million

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in 2012 and constantly increased since

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, the

number

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of

visitors

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who were accommodated on the

island

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doubled between 2011 and 2013, peaked at 1.5

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, but

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, after 2015, surpassed by

cruise

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ships’

tourists

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, who represented 0.5

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people more in 2017.

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, the

number

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of

tourists

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that visited a Caribbean

Island

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in a seven-year period increased substantially,

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cruise

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ships

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visitors

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from the weakest group have become the majority, overcoming the

visitors

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who stayed on the

island

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.