The pie chart below shows the frequency of U.S. Adults’ online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences.
The charts represent how many American adults purchase products online and their shopping preferences.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that American residents did not tend to purchase products online and buying in a physical store was their common retailing method.
To begin
with, although
the rate of weekly online shoppers was the lowest, with only 15%, they highly preferred shopping merchandise online, indicating 61%. Concerning monthly consumers, the rate made up 28% which was higher than that of non-purchasers online by 8% and they commonly purchase from physical store
, with 59%.
When it comes to adults who participated in online shopping less Fix the agreement mistake
stores
frequent
, they made up the most part of American citizens (37%), and they had a high tendency to buy in shopping stores. Change the word
frequently
Lastly
, grocery stores was
more chosen way to retail commodities to online commerce for all online customers, making 63%.Change the verb form
were
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