The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The given charts
illustrated
the information pertaining to the ownership of appliances using electricity changed and the volume of time spent Wrong verb form
illustrate
in
Change preposition
on
housework
, based on Use synonyms
households
, in a particular country from 1920 to 2019.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
experienced the largest increase in the percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
households
, Use synonyms
while
the rise of Linking Words
the
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apply
households
owning washing Use synonyms
machine
was less pronounced. It can Fix the agreement mistake
machines
also
be observed that the time in doing Linking Words
housework
per Use synonyms
week
, each household saw a decrease all the time frame.
Looking at the proportion of Use synonyms
households
using electrical appliances, washing Use synonyms
machine
, even though it was far higher than other appliances Fix the agreement mistake
machines
in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
period
, it showed Use synonyms
at
the lowest percentage of Change preposition
apply
the
families until the final year. Between 1920 and 2019, figures witnessed an upward trend from 40% to nearly 70%. Regarding other electrical machines, both Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
were
stood at 3% and 30% in 1920, respectively. As for Unnecessary verb
apply
refrigerator
, which had a sharp jump in the Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
Use synonyms
households
rate, at 100% after 60 years, followed by a plateau until the end of the Change the noun form
household
period
. Use synonyms
Likewise
, Linking Words
vacuum
Change preposition
for vacuum
cleaner
, during the Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
period
from 1920 to 2000, there was a climb in family rate, to exactly 100% in 2019 before remaining constant for 19 years.
Moving on to the number of hours for doing Use synonyms
housework
in one Use synonyms
week
, per household, which showed a continuous drop throughout the entire Use synonyms
period
. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the hours per Linking Words
week
experienced a significant fall in the first 40 years, with an initial figure of 20 hours of Use synonyms
housework
each Use synonyms
week
, followed by a slight dip to around 10% in 2019.Use synonyms
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