The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The given charts
illustrated
the information pertaining to the ownership of appliances using electricity changed and the volume of time spent Wrong verb form
illustrate
in
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on
housework
, based on households
, in a particular country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it can be seen that refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
experienced the largest increase in the percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
households
, while
the rise of the
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households
owning washing machine
was less pronounced. It can Fix the agreement mistake
machines
also
be observed that the time in doing housework
per week
, each household saw a decrease all the time frame.
Looking at the proportion of households
using electrical appliances, washing machine
, even though it was far higher than other appliances Fix the agreement mistake
machines
in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
period
, it showed at
the lowest percentage of Change preposition
apply
the
families until the final year. Between 1920 and 2019, figures witnessed an upward trend from 40% to nearly 70%. Regarding other electrical machines, both Correct article usage
apply
of
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apply
refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
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cleaners
were
stood at 3% and 30% in 1920, respectively. As for Unnecessary verb
apply
refrigerator
, which had a sharp jump in the Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
households
rate, at 100% after 60 years, followed by a plateau until the end of the Change the noun form
household
period
. Likewise
, vacuum
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for vacuum
cleaner
, during the Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
period
from 1920 to 2000, there was a climb in family rate, to exactly 100% in 2019 before remaining constant for 19 years.
Moving on to the number of hours for doing housework
in one week
, per household, which showed a continuous drop throughout the entire period
. Subsequently
, the hours per week
experienced a significant fall in the first 40 years, with an initial figure of 20 hours of housework
each week
, followed by a slight dip to around 10% in 2019.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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