In some cities public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In

day

digital age, some city councils plan to replace public parks for local residents and expand spaces to make places for many natural

gardens

which are grown organic

vegetables

and

fruit

.

This

author believes the benefits of encouragement in high healthy product consumption and improvement in awareness of healthy lifestyle always far outweigh the drawback of the negative indirect impact on the surrounding environment. The most advantageous factor of growing own

fruit

and

vegetables

is that it is a valuable commitment for people of all ages to highly use healthy

food

. People who grow their own organic

fruit

and

vegetables

have

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more enthusiastic experiments to

eat

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eating

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them every

day

. By the

way

,

gardens

always live in healthy lifestyle throughout what they consume. Take Japan as a particular example for

this

statement,

although

the spaces

of

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Japanese

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are limited, they still spend

a little spaces

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little spaces

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to grow their own fresh

vegetables

for their healthy and balanced meals. They

also

believe that

this

way

helps them considerably

reducing to suffer

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reduce

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the obesity or some diseases related to

food

consumption. Another significant advantage of replacing public amenities to make

way

for

gardens

is raising significant awareness of healthy

fruit

.

This

can be seen that young generations are more responsible for the

food

they eat and they prioritize eating healthier and healthier products

instead

of fast

food

and

low

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nutritious

product

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products

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. The best instance of

this

notion is formed in each child about eating healthy

food

. It is key for parents to educate their children about a healthy and balanced lifestyle throughout their

food

consumption.

Thus

, they can avoid some harmful and ineffective lives of each person presently. One of the few disadvantages of owning fresh products in their

gardens

is the requirement

immediate

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fertilizers

and

pesticides

for every plant. There is no doubt that there

is

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are

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a lot of toxic effects on the environment in the

way

how they grow fruits and

vegetables

.

Moreover

, it develops dramatically the polluted environment in all fields because of

fertilizers

and

pesticides

used. It is clearly evident that Vietnamese households lean towards using a massive number of

fertilizers

to grow quickly their own

vegetables

and

fruit

or some

pesticides

to produce many perfect

food

for their

food

for their local residents. Nut,

this

is the most harmful

way

to all citizens who suffer cancer and some illnesses about their digestion when they utilize

this

product.

To sum up

, the trend of applying more

fertilizers

and

pesticides

to plants is outweighed by the development of good awareness of healthy

fruit

and the recommendations for a healthier

lifestyles

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lifestyle

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.

Hence

, the local government should pay more attention to these cities to make their countries better

day

by

day

.