In some cities public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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digital age, some city councils plan to replace public parks for local residents and expand spaces to make places for many natural

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which are grown organic

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and

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author believes the benefits of encouragement in high healthy product consumption and improvement in awareness of healthy lifestyle always far outweigh the drawback of the negative indirect impact on the surrounding environment. The most advantageous factor of growing own

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and

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is that it is a valuable commitment for people of all ages to highly use healthy

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. People who grow their own organic

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and

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more enthusiastic experiments to

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them every

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. By the

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,

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always live in healthy lifestyle throughout what they consume. Take Japan as a particular example for

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statement,

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are limited, they still spend

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to grow their own fresh

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for their healthy and balanced meals. They

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believe that

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helps them considerably

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the obesity or some diseases related to

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consumption. Another significant advantage of replacing public amenities to make

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for

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is raising significant awareness of healthy

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.

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can be seen that young generations are more responsible for the

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they eat and they prioritize eating healthier and healthier products

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of fast

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and

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nutritious

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notion is formed in each child about eating healthy

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. It is key for parents to educate their children about a healthy and balanced lifestyle throughout their

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consumption.

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, they can avoid some harmful and ineffective lives of each person presently. One of the few disadvantages of owning fresh products in their

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is the requirement

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fertilizers

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and

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for every plant. There is no doubt that there

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a lot of toxic effects on the environment in the

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how they grow fruits and

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, it develops dramatically the polluted environment in all fields because of

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and

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used. It is clearly evident that Vietnamese households lean towards using a massive number of

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to grow quickly their own

vegetables

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and

fruit

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or some

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to produce many perfect

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for their

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for their local residents. Nut,

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is the most harmful

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to all citizens who suffer cancer and some illnesses about their digestion when they utilize

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product.

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, the trend of applying more

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and

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to plants is outweighed by the development of good awareness of healthy

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and the recommendations for a healthier

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, the local government should pay more attention to these cities to make their countries better

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by

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