The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map shows changes in the layout of a school between 1985 and the present. Generally speaking, the school has been significantly changed as many new facilities have been established to serve students‘ educational and recreational demands.
In 1985, a road continued up to the playing fields,
however
, now that part of the road reaching the playing fields is replaced with trees. The area situated on the left used to be a library, car park, as well as
classrooms, nevertheless
, a learning resource centre, classrooms, pool and even a fitness centre are now built there. In addition
to that, instead
of the classroom block with two storeys on the right, the space is today occupied by two buildings for classrooms of which one is the classroom block consisting of three storeys. As a consequence
of all innovative constructions, the fields for playing were reduced in size, but their locations remained the same.Submitted by oimigle on
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