The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
money
(measured in pounds
sterling) consumer
Replace the word
consumed
five
different goods (cars, computers, books, Change preposition
by five
perfume
and cameras
) in France
and UK
in Correct article usage
the UK
years
2010.
Correct article usage
the years
Overall
, the UK
spent more money
than France
in the given time period. Both France
and UK
accounted most
of their Change preposition
for most
money
for cars. In contrast
, the UK
spent least
Change the article
the least
money
for
Change preposition
on
perfume
while
France
spent on cameras
. Nevertheless
, the most significant difference in expenditure between two
countries was Correct article usage
the two
cameras
.
First and above all
, people in the UK
, spent about 450,000 pounds
whereas
in France
were 400,000 pounds
with regard to cars. Additionally
, in the UK
expenditure on books higher
than Add a missing verb
is higher
France
, about 400,000 Change preposition
in France
pounds
and 350,000 pounds
respectively. In the UK
, amount
of their Correct article usage
the amount
money
spent on cameras
(350,000 pounds
) over
double that of Add a missing verb
was over
France
, which was 150,000 pounds
.
Furthermore
, the total expenditure on consumer goods was higher in France
. Above 350,000 pounds
was spent by French
on computers which was marginally more than Correct article usage
the French
British
who spent about 350,000 Correct article usage
the British
pounds
. In terms of perfume
, neither by British nor by French spent much on perfume
which were
around 200,000 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
pounds
in France
and just below 200,000 pounds
in the UK
.Submitted by svdnruslu on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, pounds, perfume, cameras, france, uk with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!