The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of
foreigns
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foreign
visitors
to three varied places in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the data showed that the number of tourists to all three different areas increased over the years. Despite this
, the visitors
to the lakes decreased dramatically in 2002, compared to the other two places in the country.
It is Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
worthy
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worth
to note
that, since 1987, the Change the verb form
noting
visitors
to the mountains area never fell and stood out with approximately 35 Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
thousands
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thousand
visitors
except saw the plateau in
between 1997 and 2002 with nearly 30 Change preposition
apply
thousands
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thousand
visitors
. Similarly
, the visitors
to the coast rose sharply Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
with
nearly 75 Change preposition
to
thousands
in 2007 despite Change to singular
thousand
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a slightly
slightly decreased
in 1992.
The Replace the word
slight decrease
visitors
to the lakes one
the other hand, with around 10 Correct your spelling
on
thousands
people escalated substantially up to about 40 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
in 1997 and again rose markedly up to nearly around 75 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
in 2002 before it saw Change to singular
thousand
dramatic
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a dramatic
decreased
in 2007 with approximately 50 Replace the word
decrease
thousands
tourists.Change to singular
thousand
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