The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph presents information about how much money
spent
on bananas in four different countries over a decade, from 1994 to 2004.
Add a missing verb
was spent
Overall
, it can be seen all four countries had been showing a period of volatility. Another significant feature is that the highest price belonged to Japan, and the lowest currency was in the USA.
Japan had the highest cost of bananas, at under 2.00 Linking Words
dollars
per kg, and it is observed it grew dramatically to its spike, at nearly 3.00 Use synonyms
dollars
. Use synonyms
Then
it had a fluctuation in Linking Words
8-
Add an article
the 8-year
year
period, and it had a moderate rise to over 2.50 Use synonyms
dollars
. The currency in France Use synonyms
Unnecessary verb
apply
had
remained stable until 1997, and it had an oscillation until the Verb problem
apply
last
Linking Words
year
, 2004.
The lowest price was in the USA, at approximately 0.70 Use synonyms
dollars
in 1994. The Use synonyms
following
Linking Words
this
, it rose significantly to around 1.20 Linking Words
dollars
for a Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
Then
, it oscillated in Linking Words
5-
Add an article
a 5-year
the 5-year
year
period, and it remained constant until 2004. In Germany, it had under 1.50 Use synonyms
dollars
in bananas in Use synonyms
first
Change the article
the first
year
, and it fluctuated until 2001. Use synonyms
Next,
it had been reduced moderately to nearly 1.20 Linking Words
dollars
Use synonyms
,
and remained stable until the Remove the comma
apply
last
Linking Words
year
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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