The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line graph presents information about how much money
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on bananas in four different countries over a decade, from 1994 to 2004.
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, it can be seen all four countries had been showing a period of volatility. Another significant feature is that the highest price belonged to Japan, and the lowest currency was in the USA. Japan had the highest cost of bananas, at under 2.00
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per kg, and it is observed it grew dramatically to its spike, at nearly 3.00
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.
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it had a fluctuation in
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period, and it had a moderate rise to over 2.50
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. The currency in France
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remained stable until 1997, and it had an oscillation until the
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, 2004. The lowest price was in the USA, at approximately 0.70
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in 1994. The
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, it rose significantly to around 1.20
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for a
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, it oscillated in
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year
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period, and it remained constant until 2004. In Germany, it had under 1.50
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in bananas in
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year
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, and it fluctuated until 2001.
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it had been reduced moderately to nearly 1.20
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and remained stable until the
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year
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Fluctuate
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stable/Stability
  • Significant
  • Gradual
  • Sharp
  • Slight
  • Peak
  • Plummet
  • Spike
  • Level off
  • Dip
  • Plateau
  • Cost
  • Price
  • Currency
  • Decade
  • Year-on-year
  • Economic factors
  • Consumer demand
  • Inflation
  • Market forces
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