The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph presents information about how much money
spent
on bananas in four different countries over a decade, from 1994 to 2004.
Add a missing verb
was spent
Overall
, it can be seen all four countries had been showing a period of volatility. Another significant feature is that the highest price belonged to Japan, and the lowest currency was in the USA.
Japan had the highest cost of bananas, at under 2.00 dollars
per kg, and it is observed it grew dramatically to its spike, at nearly 3.00 dollars
. Then
it had a fluctuation in 8-
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the 8-year
year
period, and it had a moderate rise to over 2.50 dollars
. The currency in France Unnecessary verb
apply
had
remained stable until 1997, and it had an oscillation until the Verb problem
apply
last
year
, 2004.
The lowest price was in the USA, at approximately 0.70 dollars
in 1994. The following
this
, it rose significantly to around 1.20 dollars
for a year
. Then
, it oscillated in 5-
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a 5-year
the 5-year
year
period, and it remained constant until 2004. In Germany, it had under 1.50 dollars
in bananas in first
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the first
year
, and it fluctuated until 2001. Next,
it had been reduced moderately to nearly 1.20 dollars
,
and remained stable until the Remove the comma
apply
last
year
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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