Topic: Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that some individuals believe the expenditure of money on roads and motorways is the top priority

while

others consider that spending on public transport

system

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such

as

railways

and

trams

is more important and

need

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to

carry

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out quickly as

impossible

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as they can.

This

author will disagree with the first idea and describe some reasons why. It can be

regconized

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recognised

that

due to

the industrial revolution from a long time ago until nowadays, the appearance of

railway

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the railway

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system

became more and more popular with its convenient and comfortable for many people. Since

the

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its

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successful development

an

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and

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establishment, another

system

turned up after that known as

tram

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the tram

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. Unlike

with

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apply

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the railway, the tram

built

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was built

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that

connecting

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with

electrical

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the electrical

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system

and

having

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linked to power lines by the contemporary term light rail. Because of flexibility and comfort, many guys who enjoy both

trams

and

railways

, usually go to the work office by these means of transport in daily life. Globally, in many countries, every

cities

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city

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or small region has built up the

railways

as

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a trams

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trams

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tram

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system

in order that

adopting

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the

resident’s

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residents’

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requestments

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requirements

.

For instance

, many

business men

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businessmen

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or women had

investigated

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invested

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lots of money and finance into the projects of new

railways

because of the influence

from

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of

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railways

and

trams

into

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on

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dwellers

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dwellers'

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life

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.

On the other hand

, improving road infrastructure quality would promote economic development in a country. Thanks to the development of a well-connected road network, various regions across the country would be linked, enabling the flow of raw materials and goods between industrial zones and consumers to be more convenient, even over considerable distances.

This

would foster production, leading to economic growth. In Vietnam,

for instance

, the new high-quality motorways enable online retailers based in the southern region to swiftly deliver orders to customers located in the northern region within 1-2 days. Another point worth mentioning is that modern roads can

also

support the tourism industry by providing easier access to tourist destinations.

This

can stimulate local economies through increased expenditure on other tourist-related activities. In conclusion, investment

on

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roads, motorways,

railways

and

trams

have

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massive

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a massive

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impact

to

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on

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economy

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the economy

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market and

resident

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residents

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life

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lives

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because

its

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it

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bring

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brings

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back many benefits and

oppoturnities

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opportunities

of earning

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money for

ownself

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oneself

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.