Writing task 1. The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The flow chart shows a pictorial process of manufacturing

sugar

from the

sugar

cane plant.

This

short essay will explain the seven long steps involved.

Firstly

, it takes around twelve to eighteen months to grow

sugar

canes

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.

Secondly

, when the plants are ready, they can be harvested manually using sickles or by machinery if the budget allows.

Thirdly

, a different device is used to crush the

sugar

canes and squeeze out their refreshingly sweet juice. Fourthly, since we want the

sugar

and not the juice, we need to pass it through a limestone filter. Fifthly, a large pot called the evaporator is used to heat up the juice until it becomes a syrup. Sixthly, an equipment called the centrifuge vigorously shakes the syrup to separate it from

sugar

crystals.

Finally

, natural

sugar

is obtained after drying and cooling the crystals. We can understand that the extraction of

sugar

from natural resources is a meticulous process with several steps involved.

Hopefully

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that gives us a better appreciation for

this

carbohydrate as compared to other artificial sweeteners.