Writing task 1. The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart shows a pictorial process of manufacturing
sugar
from the Use synonyms
sugar
cane plant. Use synonyms
This
short essay will explain the seven long steps involved.
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Firstly
, it takes around twelve to eighteen months to grow Linking Words
sugar
Use synonyms
canes
. Fix the agreement mistake
cane
Secondly
, when the plants are ready, they can be harvested manually using sickles or by machinery if the budget allows. Linking Words
Thirdly
, a different device is used to crush the Linking Words
sugar
canes and squeeze out their refreshingly sweet juice. Fourthly, since we want the Use synonyms
sugar
and not the juice, we need to pass it through a limestone filter. Fifthly, a large pot called the evaporator is used to heat up the juice until it becomes a syrup. Sixthly, an equipment called the centrifuge vigorously shakes the syrup to separate it from Use synonyms
sugar
crystals. Use synonyms
Finally
, natural Linking Words
sugar
is obtained after drying and cooling the crystals.
We can understand that the extraction of Use synonyms
sugar
from natural resources is a meticulous process with several steps involved. Use synonyms
Hopefully
that gives us a better appreciation for Add a comma
Hopefully,
this
carbohydrate as compared to other artificial sweeteners.Linking Words
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