Writing task 1. The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Writing task 1. The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The flow chart shows a pictorial process of manufacturing
sugar
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from the
sugar
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cane plant.
This
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short essay will explain the seven long steps involved.
Firstly
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, it takes around twelve to eighteen months to grow
sugar
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canes
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cane
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.
Secondly
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, when the plants are ready, they can be harvested manually using sickles or by machinery if the budget allows.
Thirdly
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, a different device is used to crush the
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canes and squeeze out their refreshingly sweet juice. Fourthly, since we want the
sugar
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and not the juice, we need to pass it through a limestone filter. Fifthly, a large pot called the evaporator is used to heat up the juice until it becomes a syrup. Sixthly, an equipment called the centrifuge vigorously shakes the syrup to separate it from
sugar
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crystals.
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, natural
sugar
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is obtained after drying and cooling the crystals. We can understand that the extraction of
sugar
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from natural resources is a meticulous process with several steps involved.
Hopefully
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Hopefully,
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that gives us a better appreciation for
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carbohydrate as compared to other artificial sweeteners.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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