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the chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007 , 2011 and 2015

the chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007 , 2011 and 2015
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The given bar chart compares the number of American
households
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 by their yearly earnings in three specific years -2007,2011 and 2015 In general, the lowest number of
households
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 throughout the period was the association which
saw to earn
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earned
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 75,000 to 99,999 dollars per year. It can
also
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 be seen that all compensation groups experienced an upward trend except for the 25,000 to 49,000
troop
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. With regards to the first three groups which had a lower income. By 2007, there were about 20 to 25 million
households
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 had under 74,999 dollars in income per year . In the next 4 years, the less than 25,000 dollar group and the 25,000 - 49,999 dollar group's figure increased to about 28 million and exactly 30 million
households
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, respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words households with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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