The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from eggs to adult fish.
The diagram illustrates various stages in the development of a
salmon
.
Overall
, there are eight stages in the life
cycle
of the salmon
, starting with eggs and continuing until they become fully-grown
adults.
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fully grown
At the first stage
in the life
cycle
, the female salmon
chooses the best spot in rivers and lays a massive number of eggs, which are then
incubated before developing into tiny fish
. At this
point, the fish
have a long tail and do not yet have the appearance of a normal fish
. In the next stage, the fish
grow quickly in size and move downstream to freshwater areas, which are suitable for rearing, before migrating to estuaries where they continue to be reared.
At the following stage in the life
cycle
, the young fish
become much bigger and begin their journey to the ocean where they develop into mature adult salmon
. The adult fish
migrate upstream to spawning areas of rivers where they will mate and spawn, and the life
cycle
starts again.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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