In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Technological developments are pushing toward self-driven vehicles,
therefore
drivers won't be necessary even in public transport
Systems. In my opinion, the advantages are more than any difficulty this
could come along with
. Analyzing factors such
as safety, standardization and organization will give us a better perspective.
First of all, In the future driverless cars will come with all the sensors required to enhance the actual security measures that have been taken. As an illustration, you can see how the UAV. (uncommanded air vehicle) has the ability to return to its take-off spot or an alternative landing field in case of any trouble in the communication with the command centre hence
avoiding the unpleasant events. This
is an actual tool available that will be improved for future cars that as a result
will bring us a safer transportation System.
Secondly
, Without the driver who is a very influenceable human being by both external and internal factors, actual means of transport
such
as buses and trucks have a lack of standardization, that feature makes them disorganized, many times it directly affects punctuality and makes people
decide to drive by themselves and as a consequence
crowded traffic. For instance
, in Bogota which is my home town the public transport
is messy, nobody cares about others’ time, it is so crowded that sometimes you have to wait for the next bus, all these issues are due to
the lack of systematization, standardization and central control. Problems that with driverless vehicles we could overtake.
In contrast
, Some people
think that this
kind of transport
could affect security, but there always will be counter-arguments to new developments, and with combined effort, people
, technology and regulations will manage to offer a good and safe solution.
To conclude
, technology has been improving people
's level of Life, therefore
we have to embrace it, and always remember that humanity is who drives tech development. With this
in mind, I'm strongly certain that future driverless vehicles are going to be a solution for the actual transportation system with so many new and better features that will outweigh its disadvantages.Submitted by otiyog on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
logical structure
Try to tighten the logical flow between paragraphs and ensure that each point supports the thesis in a clear, straightforward manner.
introduction conclusion present
While the introduction and conclusion are clear, the introduction can be further developed to preview the main points.
supported main points
Use clearer topic sentences and transitions to link ideas across paragraphs more effectively.
complete response
Ensure that each point directly addresses the prompt; evaluate both advantages and disadvantages more thoroughly to provide a balanced view.
clear comprehensive ideas
Streamline ideas for clarity and ensure that each paragraph has a focused main idea.
relevant specific examples
Incorporate more specific real-world examples to strengthen arguments.
task response
Addresses the prompt directly and provides a clear opinion.
coherence cohesion
Introduction and conclusion are clearly present and reflect the main argument effectively.
task response
Includes relevant examples to support main points, although more specifics can enhance the argument.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.