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2.The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

2.The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
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The line graph illustrates how much
waste
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 was generated by three enterprises, namely Companies A,
B
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, and
C
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 over a 15-year period starting from 2000 to 2015. It is noticeable that the amount of
waste
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 produced by
company
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C
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 registered dramatic upward trends,
while
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 that of companies A and
B
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 witnessed completely an opposite trajectory during the survey period.
Company
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C
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, notably, was by far the most important
waste
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 generation in the final year In 2000,
waste
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 production by
company
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 A was the highest prevalence, accounting for exactly 12
tons
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, which was in the region of 4
tons
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 higher than
waste
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 output in
company
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B
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. After that, there was a remarkable decline to nearly 11
tons
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 in the figure for
company
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 A in 2005, whilst a sharp increase to around 10
tons
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 was witnessed in the statistics of
company
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B
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 at the same time.
Subsequently
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, both saw sharp decreases, with roughly 8
tons
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 and precisely 3
tons
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 respectively in 2015. From 2000 onwards, approximately 4
tons
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 of
waste
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 output came from
company
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C
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, hitting the lowest point in 2000, after which it went up sharply to almost 7
tons
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 in 2010 before reaching its peak of more or less 10
tons
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, accounting for the first rank in
waste
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 generation in the final year

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