The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph illustrates
daily
preference Correct article usage
the daily
of
transport made by local people living in Change preposition
for
UK
from 1970 to 2030.
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the UK
Overall
, commuters' travel preferences were cars at
Change preposition
in
first
place, Correct article usage
the first
while
bus and train use were
slightly different with the amount.Change the verb form
was
Thus
, at the end
of the year
bus users were the least of all three.
Private cars were Add a comma
year,
quiet
popular from the very Correct your spelling
quite
beggining
of 1970 , which was the highest on Correct your spelling
beginning
records
for having about 6 m commuters on Fix the agreement mistake
record
avarage
scale. Automobile statistics had fluctuations over the years Correct your spelling
average
that
in 2000 Correct word choice
apply
significant
Correct article usage
a significant
rose
Replace the word
rise
of
interest in Change preposition
in
UK
was more than 6 Correct article usage
the UK
millions
. Change to singular
million
At the end
of this
period, country
made its highest increase of 9 Add an article
the country
a country
millions
in 2030.
Change to singular
million
On the other hand
, public transportation took less attention than the previous. In 1970 bus users index was closer to car's
with around 4 Change the noun form
cars
car
millions
. Change to singular
million
However
, for the rest of the years
Add a comma
years,
quantitiy
of Correct your spelling
quantity
passangers
hit Correct your spelling
passengers
the
rock bottom and faced Correct article usage
apply
its
lowest depending on Replace the word
it's
it is
information
. Add an article
the information
While
,
train usage had increasing numbers and made 6 Remove the comma
apply
millions
Change to singular
million
at the end
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