Your friend has just had a new baby and you are having a party for them. Write a letter to another friend inviting them to the party and asking them to contribute to a present. In the letter, explain the reason for the party and the time of the party give directions to your house ask them to contribute money for a present Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Rose,
I am writing to invite you to a
party
on the 22nd of June 2024. You might have heard that our friend Des is welcoming a new baby arrival on the 22nd of May 2024 at 11pm so I would like to organise a party
in my place. The party
will be starting at 12pm mid-day at my place at 11 Helen Street
, Fletcher. You can catch a 101 bus at Station Street
, which is close to your house. When you arrive at the last
bus station stop, turn to the left into Rae Street
then
walk for 5 minutes until you see Helen Street
. On Helen Street
, you can see on the left side a big house with a big front yard with rose flowers. We contributed $5 for the party
to get a gift card and other stuff. It would be great if you could also
transfer $5 to my bank account. Here is my bank account: BSB: XXXX and account number : yyyy. Let me know if you need more information regarding the party
.
I am looking forward to seeing you in the party
.
With love,
TesSubmitted by ttesfalove on
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task achievement
To strengthen the task response, consider explaining more about why the gift card will be useful for the new parents or why it's meaningful.
coherence cohesion
For better coherence, you might want to use more transitional phrases to link your ideas smoothly.
task achievement
The letter provides clear details about the party timing and directions.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are polite and appropriate.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,