Your friend has just had a new baby and you are having a party for them. Write a letter to another friend inviting them to the party and asking them to contribute to a present. In the letter, explain the reason for the party and the time of the party give directions to your house ask them to contribute money for a present Write at least 150 words.  You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Rose, I am writing to invite you to a

party

on the 22nd of June 2024. You might have heard that our friend Des is welcoming a new baby arrival on the 22nd of May 2024 at 11pm so I would like to organise a

party

in my place. The

party

will be starting at 12pm mid-day at my place at 11 Helen

Street

, Fletcher. You can catch a 101 bus at Station

Street

, which is close to your house. When you arrive at the

last

bus station stop, turn to the left into Rae

Street

then

walk for 5 minutes until you see Helen

Street

. On Helen

Street

, you can see on the left side a big house with a big front yard with rose flowers. We contributed $5 for the

party

to get a gift card and other stuff. It would be great if you could

also

transfer $5 to my bank account. Here is my bank account: BSB: XXXX and account number : yyyy. Let me know if you need more information regarding the

party

. I am looking forward to seeing you in the

party

. With love, Tes

Submitted by ttesfalove on Mon Jun 03 2024

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task achievement

To strengthen the task response, consider explaining more about why the gift card will be useful for the new parents or why it's meaningful.

coherence cohesion

For better coherence, you might want to use more transitional phrases to link your ideas smoothly.

task achievement

The letter provides clear details about the party timing and directions.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing of the letter are polite and appropriate.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

192 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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