You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart shows the rate of illiteracy in different parts of the world,

broen

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broken

doen

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down

into

men

and

women

last

year.

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, we can see that there is a big difference in different

part

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parts

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of the world but that

women

are much less likely to be able to be literate. we can see people

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living

lining

sub saharan

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sub-Saharan

africa

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Africa

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, south

asia

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Asia

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, and arab states are much more likely to be illiterate. approximately half

women

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of women

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in these countries

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are

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unable to read or write with the figure as high as 56% in south

asia

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Asia

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however

, the figure for

men

is lower, at around 30%.

however

this

is still high.

in contrast

, in other

countries

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countries,

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the vast majority of people read and write. in developed

countris

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countries

nearly everybody is literate.

however

, there are

slight

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women

with illiteracy than

men

. in east

asia

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Asia

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and

oceania

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Oceania

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it is clear that

there is

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a big

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difference between

men

and

women

. less than ten

percent

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per cent

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men

are illiterate but

women

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for women

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the figure is more

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than

thand

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than

double at 20%

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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

174 words

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