Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.

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Every
person
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has a different point of perspective towards seeing
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some believe that whatever work they are doing well is already good rather
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taking a risk and shifting to a new workplace
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others believe that trying new
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taking
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is good . I strongly believe in the second view because of the following reasons .
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with , It has some positive and negative
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Talking about sticking to one job post in which we are already good will make you feel bored to some extent and you will have less knowledge about other jobs. Because we will lose opportunity in other sectors . If that particular sector goes down in the job market
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the
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will not be able to switch to
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job post
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lack of experience
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, I am working for a company and my main task is not different
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repeat the same task every day I will feel like
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nothing new to learn . Next comes trying new tasks and learning new skills which leads him to be successful . A
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who repeats similar
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cannot learn new skills
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he or she will have fears to try and will be afraid of failing.
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, if one does not try novel skills and risky decisions will stay in his comfort zone. A
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who seeks innovation and has the courage to take
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will always be in search of new opportunities and new solutions for any problem.If you are stuck on someone thing you will never be successful .
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, successful people embrace new
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and
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.
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is because taking
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and trying new
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is not only interesting but
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helps people to confront new experiences.
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