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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar chart offers a compelling comparative analysis of the number of American
families
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, earning various
income
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 segments in 2007, 2011, and 2015. A broad view of the graph provides a glimpse into the relatively constant pattern of mid-level earners as opposed to the significant divergence exhibited in the population of the affluent society. An in-depth examination of the data reveals the roughly fixed population of
families
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 earning an
income
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 segment starting from $50,000 to $100,000 which continually accounted for 35 million
families
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 in total.
This
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,
however
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, is in marked contrast to the figures for wealthy households whose
income
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 surpasses $100,000, experiencing a considerable rise to a population of approximately 35 million people in 2015. Turning to
families
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 with lower than average
income
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 (less than$25,000-$50,000) , a notable growth to a sum of 60 million people is clearly visible in 2011 which
subsequently
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, experienced a negligible decrease in 2015 .

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household
  • income distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • significant growth
  • decline
  • comparative analysis
  • trends
  • disparity
  • shift
  • socio-economic factors
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