The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
Given are two charts providing a comparison of
Japanese
tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995, as well as
the certain percentages
of Japanese
tourist
visiting Australia.
It can be inferred from the illustration that the number of Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
Japanese
tourists travelling abroad climbed steadily from 5 millions
people in 1985 to approximately 11 Change to singular
million
millions
in 1990. But in 1991, the Change to singular
million
Japanese
Correct quantifier usage
number of Japanese
travellers
decrease
steadily to 10.5 Wrong verb form
decreased
millions
. Before soaring to a staggering 15 Change to singular
million
millions
in 1995, the number of Change to singular
million
travellers
remained stable between 1992 and 1994 with 13 million
travellers
.
It is also
interesting to note that only 2 percent
out of 5 Change the spelling
per cent
million
travellers
in 1985 went to Australia. The percentages
of Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
the
Correct article usage
apply
Japanese
tourists in Australi
went up steadily to 5 Correct your spelling
Australia
percent
from 9.5 Change the spelling
per cent
million
in 1989. However
, in 1990, the percentages
slipped to approximately 4.2 Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
percent
. By far the highest Change the spelling
per cent
percentages
of Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
Japanese
visited Australia in 1994 with 6.2 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
from
13.5 Change preposition
of
million
people, by contrast
in
Change preposition
apply
last
year, the percentages
dropped steadily to 6 Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
percent
out of 15 Change the spelling
per cent
million
travellers
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