The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The following bar chart represents the percentages of four different modes of transportation;

train

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,

car

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, tube, and

bus

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, used to commute back and forth from work in an unidentified European city in 1960, 1980, and 2000.

Overall

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, it can be clearly observed that trends of travelling by

car

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and

bus

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experienced

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an extreme shift of figures,

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that of the other two

vehicals

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vehicles

underwent little

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throughout the given time frame.

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with, in 1960, commuters travelled by

bus

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at

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almost 40% was the highest number among all

transports

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, followed by tube,

train

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, and

car

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at approximately 29%, 18%, and 8%, respectively. In regards

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, in 1980, the

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preferred

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modes of transport changed where

bus

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passengers dropped

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by almost

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10%, the number of commuters by

train

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surpassed the aforementioned means with the same rate and

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few

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a few

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percentages behind. Meanwhile, those who

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drive

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and

taking

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tube

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tubes

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are at

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have

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similar figures of more than 20% with few

difference

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differences

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.

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, it is interesting to note that unlike forty years ago the number of workers driving their

car

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in 2000 surprisingly outnumbered that of those who

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buses and ranked the top among

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the others

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others

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other

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four choices of travelling, whilst statistics of those who

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underground

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train

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trains

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and

train

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were similar back

then

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at about 25%, and 22%,respectively.