The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The following bar chart represents the percentages of four different modes of transportation;
train
, car
, tube, and bus
, used to commute back and forth from work in an unidentified European city in 1960, 1980, and 2000.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that trends of travelling by car
and bus
experienced with
an extreme shift of figures, Change preposition
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whereas
that of the other two vehicals
underwent little Correct your spelling
vehicles
fluctaution
throughout the given time frame.
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fluctuation
fluctuations
To begin
with, in 1960, commuters travelled by bus
at
almost 40% was the highest number among all Change preposition
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transports
, followed by tube, Fix the agreement mistake
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train
, and car
at approximately 29%, 18%, and 8%, respectively.
In regards with
, in 1980, the Change preposition
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preferable
modes of transport changed where Correct word choice
preferred
bus
passengers dropped almost
10%, the number of commuters by Change preposition
by almost
train
surpassed the aforementioned means with the same rate and overcome
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few
percentages behind. Meanwhile, those who Correct article usage
a few
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tube
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tubes
are at
similar figures of more than 20% with few Verb problem
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difference
.
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differences
However
, it is interesting to note that unlike forty years ago the number of workers driving their car
in 2000 surprisingly outnumbered that of those who taking
buses and ranked the top among Wrong verb form
took
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the others
others
four choices of travelling, whilst statistics of those who Correct quantifier usage
other
using
underground Wrong verb form
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train
and Fix the agreement mistake
trains
train
were similar back then
at about 25%, and 22%,respectively.Submitted by kamonluck1999 on
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