The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.

The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
The diagram given illustrates the different stages of development of the honey bee during its life
cycle
. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that there are five primary stages shown in the process, from
egg
to mature insect.
In addition
, the complete life
cycle
lasts between 34 and 36
days
. The life
cycle
of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an
egg
, and it lays one or two eggs every three
days
. Between 9 and 10
days
later, each
egg
hatches, and the immature insect, or nymph, appears. During the third stage of the process, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times.
This
moulting first takes place 5
days
after the
egg
hatches,
then
7
days
later, and again another 9
days
later. After a total of 30 to 31
days
from the start of the
cycle
, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, and in the next 4
days
, it reaches full maturity.
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