the chart below shows what anthropology graudates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

the chart below shows what anthropology graudates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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illustrates what undergraduate students in anthropology did they do after finishing their course.
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depicts the wages of anthropologists after five years of work.
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consists of six types of careers and the table comprises three types of employment for four various incomes. First of all, at first glance at the pie
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, unknown and full-time postgraduate study are similar proportion at 8%,
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the unemployed and part-time job contributed 12% and 18% respectively. The remaining figures are 5% which are both for part-time jobs and post-graduate study as well. As we can see more in detail, the table indicates that freelance consultants have the pre cent of the 100,000 dollars and more via $75,000-99,999 in the same figures at 40%, the difference between $100,000 and 75,000 wages for the government sector is 10% that former is 50% and the latter includes 40%. The share of the freelance and the government at $25,000-49,999 and $50,000-74,999 account for 5% and 15% respectively. The private companies at $100,00 rank
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, $75,000-99,999 is a quarter, the percentage of 25,000-49,999 dollars and 50,000-74, 999 dollars are responsible for 10% and 35%.
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